International tourism has brought about enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
As the global economic growth fast in the recent years, travelling around the world have become something affordable for majority of people. However, no one can deny that there are positive and negative outcomes on host destinations which come along with this traveling habit changes. Personally, by deliberating both sides, there are more considerable amounts of advantages compared to disadvantages itself.
The most apparent merit as the impact of international tourism is the emergence of new income sources for local people. Usually, visitors will need accommodations, transportations, and foods during their trips. Hence, the local people can provide it all to earn sum of money. In addition, compared to the other places, the certain areas that can attract the tourists will get special concern from authorities to enhance the construction of good public facilities which eventually can be utilized by local people to support their daily activities. Not to mention, the openness to global tourism in positive way will make local inhabitants more tolerant towards diversity as the side effect of cultural exchanges.
On the contrary, there also some potential drawbacks that is brought by this tourism globalization. The over-exploited of local resources might endanger the environment and the local wisdom. For instance, the vast growth of new buildings to support the tourism that do not well planned and prepared will damage the ecosystem equilibrium. Furthermore, the cultures of tourists are not always suitable for the local people values and it might effects them in the bad way. However, all these drawbacks can be addressed as long as the authorities impose some mandatory policies to protect the local societies and environment as well.
In conclusion, by carefully measuring both effects, the advantages of international tourism to local ecosystem outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54577464789 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03442483521 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.06434054 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215334758233 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746149553085 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705399957687 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143490323654 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776169306312 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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