Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the adventages and disadvantages of solar energy?
A few years lately, as the public awareness of the sustainability of energy resources in the future is increasing, solar energy is emerged as one of the most essential alternative. Along with this phenomenon, both positive and negative impacts must be acknowledged and handled precisely beforehand.
The positive side which also becomes its primary reason to blossom is that the solar energy has not limited resources. As long as the sun is still exist in our solar system, it can be used to supply energy for the whole world and not to mention it is labelled as eco-friendly as well. It is really different with the long-used unrenewable energy such as coal which is predicted that will completely run out anytime soon and needs thousand years before it is recovered again. Futhermore, affordable energy resources also are important to take into consideration when looking for a new alternative for energy supllies. Therefore, the advancement lately of the technology makes the production of solar energy is cheaper compared to a few years ago and the other available alternatives today.
However, need to take into deliberation are the drawbacks that are brought by increasing of solar energy’s demand, the sudden changing to a new one may leads to the chaos and unbalance in the current industry. Public cannot ignore the fact that the coal companies have become one of the the biggest industry that provided life-earnings for so much employees and their families. Therefore, while making the conversion from the coal industry to solar energy industry, the authorities must ensure that the mentioned parties are taken into consideration.
To conclude, the high demand of solar energy leads to the more affordable energy supplies and renewable for the environment. Meanwhile, government and policy maker need to anticipate the possible chaos among the current industries as the effect of conversion to the new energy resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
... resources. As long as the sun is still exist in our solar system, it can be used to ...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...mpletely run out anytime soon and needs thousand years before it is recovered again. Fut...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...t the coal companies have become one of the the biggest industry that provided life-ear...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...t the coal companies have become one of the the biggest industry that provided life-ear...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...stry that provided life-earnings for so much employees and their families. Therefore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24115755627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94004284049 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.0687400263 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328854417655 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129098321554 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781561642218 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206328408957 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512725018089 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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