Many people afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. What is your view?
As the number of the crime arise these days in the public places, people hesitate to do activities outside of their home. Instead of simple action, public argue that some remarkable actions need to be taken to suppress the rate of the crimes. Personally, I think that both small and big actions should be combined to effectively overcome these problems.
When public talk about big actions, it tends to refer to the roles that can be taken by the authorities. The primary step is the strengthening of security system by putting more surveillance cameras in some strategic spots. Furthermore, the safety agents such as police and security guards also need to patrol more frequent to ensure that everything is under control. Other than that, observing the root causes behind the crimes is essential as well. By doing this, government will be able to take the more comprehend policies. It may be by obligating some more serious punishments and strict regulations to the crime perpetrators or even by providing more workplaces for everyone so they will not do the crimes just to get food supplies.
Not only fully depend on the authorities, the public also must take part in suppressing the occurrence of crimes by taking some small but effective ways. For instance, when people is in public places, they need to stay alert about their surrounding which make them aware about the safety of their belongings and themselves. Moreover, by trying to less use some flashy accessories when they are in public place will be helpful enough to restrain the crimes. Unless all the parties come in to the action and do their own responsibilities, the crime occurrence will never be overcome.
Generally, I think both small action and big action should be incorporated to address the crimes, which means that all the elements of society must collaborate to obtain the better result. Government do it by settling some regulations on it, while the public try to do some simple actions that can be done by themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95845697329 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73888044082 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1955805306 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345261144921 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116143237235 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578457099218 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223157390222 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348346694284 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.