Internet is generally considered as a blessing for mankind. Do the advantages of it outweigh its disadvantages?
The internet has become a significant part of our lives today and has made our lives so much comfortable that it is really hard to live without it. Internet is generally considered as boon to the mankind. Despite some obvious disadvantages of the internet, I believe that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are a number of major drawback when people spend too much time sitting in front of the computer surfing the internet. People tend to lose their productive time and have a negative impact on health which include short-sightedness, obesity and posture related disorders. Another disadvantage of the internet is information theft and hacking. Data and information are major benefits of the internet but some people use illegal ways to mine personal that and use it in illegal ways. Internet hackers are growing day by day and a number of people lose money in such scams.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits are more significant than such disadvantage. Firstly, Internet is a perfect tool for gathering information. Internet is very helpful for students as they are now able to search for information of the internet without need for going to a physical library. Secondly, communication has been made easier by the internet. We can connect with our friends in any part of the world using platforms such Facebook and Whatsapp or hold business meeting using platforms like Skype and Zoom. Finally, shopping and business has been made easier through the internet. People can order food and buy the latest fashion trends sitting at home through online websites. Banking and paying bills can be done online and they are efficient and time saving
In conclusion, I would argue that the advent of internet brings more benefits than drawbacks.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-06-18 | zaira | 73 | view |
| 2021-06-18 | BHAVANI KESIREDDY | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02356902357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74929793604 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.494461637 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228450144912 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852148610982 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981653606777 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13090499132 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829116312067 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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