Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It would be argued by some people that the major environmental issue of current era is loss of some species of plants and animals. In my opinion, however, there are more concerning environmental issues than the extinction of certain species.
Many species of plants and animals are going extinct due to the destruction of natural habitats by mankind. A lot of forests are cleared every year to expand cities and build big factories. When clearing land, the animals from such areas become homeless and either put in zoos or left to wander. It is very hard for them to live without natural habitat and they eventually die. Many species of plants and animals are becoming extinct dues the loss of favourable conditions due to pollution and climate change. For example, animals which live in cold areas like polar bear and penguins are reducing in numbers because of melting of ice due to rising temperature.
However, it is clear that there are major problems like climate change and overpopulation that deserve our attention. The rising sea levels due to melting of ice caps are causing coastal areas and islands to sink. Due to air pollution, there is a big hole in ozone layer and UV rays enter the atmosphere. The result is greenhouse effect which increases the temperature of earth. Population is increasing at a rapid pace and the nature is being over-exploited. Most of the rivers are polluted and we are running out of natural resources.
In conclusion, although some people think that loss of certain species of plants is more concerning as compared to some other environmental issues, I personally do not agree and believe that there are more pressing concerns as well such as overpopulation and climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95862068966 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75306336782 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3456995675 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200426935896 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569225686578 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724231407386 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136617150092 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827144740512 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.