The Internet has caused people to be isolated from their real lives. Do you agree or disagree?
With proliferation of internet among people, it is generally believed by a host of people that this technology can cause people to become less socialized and be more individualistic. To some extent, by my reckoning, I agree with this view about the internet; however, if people try to use it wisely, it would bring undeniable advantages for them.
On the one hand, cyber-addiction can be associated with some drawbacks. As an illustration, spending a great deal of time on chatting and surfing the internet is time- consuming and could be a setback for daily life. What is more, attracted by the virtual world, they are no longer interested in face to face meetings.
On the other hand, when it comes to the internet, there are valuable merits for users which cannot be eliminated. Firstly, it can provide convenient communication with others particularly loved ones without regarding geographic boundaries. Think of the connection of two people located in different continents. In fact, there is no way easier and swifter than the internet for keeping in touch. Moreover, the internet contains an endless source of information. Not only does it aware people of the latest news, but it also provides up to date knowledge for people who are keen on technology and science cases. In addition, the internet is a great means for fostering friendship. Through social networks such as Facebook and Twitter, everyone can find a right person who has a number of things in common with.
In conclusion, although, the online services may pose seclusion of people, it extremely depends on how we use it. If people use the internet in a wise approach, it will be the indispensable part of our life.
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| 2019-05-27 | Jasmineeee | 87 | view |
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- Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? 84
- Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? 89
- using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- It is generally accepted that families are not as closed as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9964664311 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96278742966 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7625502446 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184006058156 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603421801912 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050442650039 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112730301386 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04475656486 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.