It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree
Whether college students should live at home or in school's campus has long been a controversial topic. Although there are certain reasons why living with family member at home is the most beneficial, it is far from being the best for students.
There a common belief that students who stay with their guardians have more benefits. Many ague that they can completely focus on their academic studies because their parents could support them in various ways. For instance, by doing house chores or financially help such as paying the bill or meals for their children. In addition, living at home with their parents keep them away from social evils, such as drug or alcohol and mostly overnight parties. However, this type of accommodation may affect students in a negative way. For example, they tend to be over-reliant on their parents and thus do not have essential skill to live independent on their on which is detrimental in the long run.
By contract, there are more reasonable grounds as to why staying on campus is the most beneficial form of accommodation. First, living on their own require students to be more responsible for all aspect of their life comparing to those who is staying with their family. As a result, they acquire life skills and experience which help to prepare them for the future. Moreover, campus students have easy access to libraries and various source of knowledge which is always available at university, thus make their learning process more efficient and enjoyable. Nonetheless, they got the chance to meet and talk to more friends, attending more tuition activities from which elongate their relationships and vary their student's life.
In conclusion, while living with family is beneficial in several ways, it is clear that dormitory students have more advantages when they are compared. In my perspective, students should try living without their parents at school campus whenever they have the chance due to all the benefits mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun ague seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much ague', 'a good deal of ague'.
Suggestion: Much ague; A good deal of ague
...ith their guardians have more benefits. Many ague that they can completely focus on their...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pe of accommodation may affect students in a negative way. For example, they tend to be over-reli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6532802565 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3476944052 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388096955918 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141176547326 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872283622113 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269977379265 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652671118803 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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