It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often believed that some people are gifted by birth in certain areas, such as painting or playing football, while others have no talents. Others, however, argue that skills and talents can be nurtured through persistent practice if they are properly taught. Despite the fact that some have inbred talents ingrained in their genes, I firmly believe that even ordinary people can stand out in any area of interest if they are motivated and properly trained.
On the one hand, some are born with talents inherited from their ancestors which makes them stand out in a certain field, such as music or a certain scientific subject. Anecdotal evidence from scientific research from the University of Cambridge showed that more than 25 scientists of the European Revolution inherited their scientific knack from their predecessors. Galileo, for instance, had inherited his shrewdness from his father who used to be a very smart physicist. However, I, also, believe that many people were born with inbred talents, but were unable to develop them and become successful due to lack of motivation.
On the other hand, many people who used to be less skilled during their childhood and usually failure was the predominant stimulus behind their success. Take for example the famous French Architect Le Corbusier who used to be a paragon of success. He used to have poor skills when he was a student at school and many of his peers would hold him in contempt for his banal drawings. However, he was doggedly determined to become successful and motivation fueled his interest to become one of the leading architects in the world. I totally agree with this school of thought because determination and diligent attitude are the key to success.
In conclusion, while nature may provide some people with inbred talents, they might be lost if not exploited and developed properly. However, I believe that nurture through motivation, perseverance, and determination would make people successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15170278638 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66864085818 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.55014279 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224222575706 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800100863225 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415180461394 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138480122983 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293007207213 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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