It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for example for sport or music, and others are not . However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people hold a view that there are some people who are naturally talented, while other may argue that children can be trained to be good sport people or singers.
On the one hand, it is believed that talent can be practice. A child may not be born with a good singing voice, for example, but he still can be a good singer due to hard working. There are several example on how a person born with no specific talent can be taught to master an area. One of those is a famous tennis player, Nadal-who is not a born sport person, but by practicing he is now one of the most successful tennis men.
On the other hand, having natural talent is acquired in any areas. Not everything can be trained in some specific areas such as art or music but depends on natural talent, no matter how hard a child works on it or who he is trained with.
In my opinion, innate talent is necessary in work. These talents allow those who are born with them to gain some skills more easily than those who are not. However, as it is said that “Hard work beats talent when talent doesn’t work hard”, good artists or good sport people still need to train themselves to achieve success. Without talents, training can be less productive or be difficult, and without training, talent cannot be develop.
In conclusion, I believe that if someone wants to be successful in any areas, he needs both natural talent and practice himself frequently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54826254826 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41354436552 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.222542031 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310510064014 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116575392969 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670306107076 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176456235352 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704796756623 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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