Is it good for children to start using computers for an early age and spend long hours on them advantages and disadvantages

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Is it good for children to start using computers for an early age and spend long hours on them ?advantages and disadvantages

In modern epoch,Time of science and technology.It develops rapidly and makes human life easier.Computer is electronic gazette gift of technology for society.Nowadays people becoming technosavy.It leads to nation development.Therefore,children spend numerous hours on computer is not acceptable.Howerer,children start using computer from early age has some pros and cons discussed in further paragraphs.

Primarily, Start use of computer from early age enhance creativity level of children as well as, helps in holistic development.Moreover,children learn umpteen things from computer.they use computer for educational purpose also,as a source of entertainment likewise,search topic which they can not understand in calss room in addition learn easy strategy of learning.Whereas,In leisure time use to listen music,watching movies and playing games.

On the dark side,spend ample of hours to use computer haddles in their holistic development. Generate health problems like week eye sight,headache.Another noticeable thing is that,it develops behaviour problems likewise, Poor attention disorder,loose their concentration in studies.In addition,parlonged sitting habits develop obesity.Also,make children introvert and home worm.

In my opinion,’excess of every thing is bad’.Allow chindren to use technology but also, equally participate in other activities for instance games.In future the quality of education gaming in increased there is good reason to believe that these negative consequences will fall entirely away.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.51707317073 5.12529762239 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.67838702712 2.80592935109 167% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726829268293 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.077680188 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.2 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.4 7.06120827912 331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299971131094 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151840869146 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900512488177 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16532086828 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080298824892 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.98 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.42 12.4159519038 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.52 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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