It is a common belief that public open spaces, such as metropolitan parks or squares are extremely necessary. Personally, I completely agree with this view because having such places will bring many positive effects to citizens' life.
One of the main reasons why large outdoor public spaces are important is that they have a profound impact on the urban environment. To illustrate, trees and vegetation in a public park are not only producing oxygen but also helping control temperature and humidity which has resulted in a better living condition. Moreover, by having a large area of tall trees, metropolitan parks are helping to reduce ultraviolet radiation from the sun and noise from road traffic and machinery. This has led to an increase in people's quality of life.
Furthermore, open spaces are perfect places for citizens to play sports and relax. Since local governments usually install fitness and exercise equipment in public parks or squares, many citizens can access the outdoor gym for free. As a result, a large number of people are encouraged to exercise as well as influence other people to have a healthy lifestyle. In addition, parks are affordable places to have quality time with family. For example, instead of driving to a rural area for camping or a picnic, a family just simply needs a picnic mat and food for an outdoor gathering.
In conclusion, outdoor public spaces are necessary parts of all cities or towns as they bring tremendous positive impacts on human life both mentally and physically.
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 61
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people think that robots are very important for humans future development Other however think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... the outdoor gym for free. As a result, a large number of people are encouraged to exercise as we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70557813807 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7715170466 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374816715819 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114559558818 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518839645184 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202662757101 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169648333512 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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