In recent years, educational institutions are conducting online sessions to offer qualifications without requiring students to present in the physical classroom. Although this approach may cause some negative effects, I strongly believe that the benefits of distance learning outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, students who take distance learning tend to lack hands-on experience and face-to-face interaction. Since students do not study on campus, they missed the opportunity to apply their academic knowledge in the school lab. To illustrate that, if medical students did not train their surgical skills with real sample objects, it would be dangerous for their future patients. Furthermore, standard face-to-face communication is not possible, which makes it difficult to monitor whether students are focusing on the lectures or not. As a result, despite earning an online qualification, the academy knowledge they have might be uncertain.
On the other hand, one of the most significant benefits of distance learning is budget-friendly which makes it accessible for all groups of income. Nowadays, most people from low-income groups cannot afford the tuition fees because they are extremely expensive. With the availability of these online educational programs, a person from any financial group can get a qualification without any worry about the cost. In addition, students are not required to relocate to the big city in order to attend classes, which saves them a tremendous amount of living fee. For example, a student just needs a good internet connection and a computer to join the classes.
In conclusion, although there are disadvantages to distance learning, it is undeniable that this approach brings positive impacts financially. Personally, I feel that these benefits outweighed the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to outweigh'
Suggestion: to outweigh
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to tend'
Suggestion: to tend
...and students who take distance learning tend to lack handson experience and facetofa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y knowledge they have might be uncertain On the other hand one of the most signif...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ction and a computer to join the classes In conclusion although there are disadva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49818181818 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96045562721 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 275.0 20.2975951904 1355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1512.0 106.682146367 1417% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 275.0 20.7667163134 1324% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151225249103 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151225249103 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105527259296 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480765082333 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 142.0 13.0946893788 1084% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -216.11 50.2224549098 -430% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 111.7 11.3001002004 988% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.1 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.1 8.58950901804 257% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 112.0 10.1190380762 1107% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 112.0 10.7795591182 1039% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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