It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and
their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Without risk, no one can progress. Actually, risk plays a crucial role in both professional and personal people’s lives. In my opinion, although taking risks has lots of benefits it has many intense harmful.
On the one hand, every person should take risks in his/her personal life. A person who has no courage to take risks is very weak and cowardly because taking risks gives lots of opportunities to improve the quality of people's life and their careers. For example, when a person invests in a super expensive apartment in fact, he equivalents all of his/her life but if he/she can sell it gains much money and can better his/her life. In professional aspects not only does he/she learn how to trade and business boy others but also this cause improve communication skills.
On the other hand, when people fail in their risks depending on the level of risk it's harmful and can have an effect on the lives of people. It makes people become depressed or even sometimes have heart attacks. If people take risks without any plan they always fail. For example, someone who allocates all of his/her money to gambling surely loses of them. Not only does one lose all money but also everything one has in life such as a wife, house, car, etc. Hence, although taking risks has numerous advantages always should be careful to do it sensible.
In conclusion, people in a society always like to take risks because its benefits are a lot of but they should notice this point that it might have harmful effects if fail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...ofessional aspects not only does he/she learn how to trade and business boy others bu...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d or even sometimes have heart attacks. If people take risks without any plan they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, so, even so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71698113208 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39200043339 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7679390563 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353325659915 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129247626676 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938003577284 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216306867472 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599914845032 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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