It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Undeniably, there are situations in people’s careers and daily lives which requires them to decide on risky problems. Taking risks or adopting a more conservative approach is both an option. From my perspective, the benefits of riskier options weigh larger than its downsides, and can catalyze higher achievements in both work and life.
On the one hand, critics who object taking risks may point out that uncertainties and failures could cause disruptions that may lead to mental and physical damages. The guilt and remorse aroused by unsuccessful experiences in taking risks may be hard to recover from. Financial loss is another common result of investing in risky projects. Either way, it means that people would have to start again from the beginning and reconsider their choices, resulting in more time and money wasted. Without a strong personality and firm financial background, failures in taking risks may even be catastrophic.
On the other hand, it could be argued that challenging risks can push people to improve and progress, especially in their careers. Risks are directly connected to rewards, one can simply not achieve high returns if they are so risk averse. Bill Gates is one successful and reknowned example of taking risks. He beared the uncertainties and pressure of withdrawing from university, and founded Microsoft, one of the most successful companies in the world. Besides, taking risks could lead to a more adventurous and exciting life. Those reluctant to challenge themselves and are satisfied with current situations many only live dull and pain lives. Life is short if one can’t dare to take adventures, they would always regret it. Lastly, ad the saying goes, failure is the mother of success. Even if you fail after taking risks, you could learn from those defeats and improve yourself, increasing the chances of success in later attempts.
In conclusion, I contend that the positive aspects of taking risks is superior to its disadvantages, for it stimulates higher potentials of people and keep people improving themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, lastly, may, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2749244713 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80649204938 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610271903323 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.043398053 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306920879727 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887815893545 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058382503933 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181636960629 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163558851917 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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