It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree？
Some people believe that after high school learning at the universities isn't indispensable. I agree with this view because I believe that we could get a job better in the vocational schools.
On the one hand, we must spend four years in training programs in universities. Instead of some other people were learned outside communication and could them being getting a job that they dreamed. They just spend time to be short training courses in several months up to a year in vocational schools. So that not only helps them save time for learning but also helps them to become well places in the job. At the same time, the people in the college that learning everyday. But in the future, would they have a good job? Accordingly, everyone must have a choice for themselves properly. Besides, some other schools have courses from four years to five, six years that we lose time of mine for programs, class time,...finally, we only need a good job.
If the government wants to provide university places for young people, they must increase forest areas to build the places for learning. This becomes the space of universities must be large scale, so the undergraduate students many have to pay a lot of money more for school scale, new technology,...If the college students want to learn at a large school, high qualities they have to pay much money more than others.
In conclusion, I think that building universities isn't necessary. We could learn at the vocational schools that save times, save money and get a good job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: isn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, finally, if, so, well, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81679389313 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73793713394 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515267175573 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2906089242 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148551601901 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056859413941 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682124815358 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917994851586 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549536244705 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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