It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree ?
In the era of 4.0 development, any information can be found easily only through the internet, books and newspapers. It is for that reason that many people believe that in order to absorb the culture of many regions and countries, it is not necessary to go there, but only through books, the internet or movies. In this essay, I will express my disagreement weith that point of view.
Movies that reflect social realities will often give us a more special, multi-dimensional perspective than just going around to learn about life. That also reduces the time we spend learning, the hidden corners of a country that are hard to see will be brought to the small screen, carefully and carefully exploited so that we can easily recognize the that negative. The Internet and books are similar, instead of images it will be written in the form of stories or statistics in an easy to understand way. Basically, watching movies, reading stories or watching over the internet all provide a large amount of knowledge in a short period of time and have many perspectives for us to refer to.
However, it also carries a lot of risks. We are often taught not to believe what we read online, because we cannot verify the accuracy or just because of the like trick. Books too, it is often written from the perspective and subjective feelings of the author, if the writer is a person with a wide and open view, the information in the book will bring many benefits, but if they write the book based on too emotional, the story in it will no longer be true, the information from there will also become more or less false. Movies are really just a form of entertainment, filmmakers who want good revenue must create a good script, and if the script is made wrong compared to reality to attract moẻ viewers. After all, what the director and actor wants to achieve is profit only, there is no guarantee that the information is correct. Therefore, why do not we go and acquire knowledge from our own perspective, culture is not simply liked, there are often specific reasons and meanings for people to follow it, experience it themselves. Experiencing and learning will be much more interesting and realistic.
In conclusion, I do not agree with that point of view. Going outside is still very necessary, if you really want to know more about people and culture in other places, the best way is to go and experience it yourself. Lying at home and learning through books or other platforms is still only someone else's point of view, it is not highly objective and may not be accurate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 633, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... a large amount of knowledge in a short period of time and have many perspectives for us to re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, after all, in conclusion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69623059867 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63739375928 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514412416851 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4797072185 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.588235294 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226143980506 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644481952996 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415824047261 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133107220216 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369227436008 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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