It is often said that to become a successful businessman a tertiary education is not at all necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Some suppose that, to start a profitable business, people need to have higher education, however, others disagree. In this essay, I will explore both views and offer my perspective.
On the one hand, getting a degree is essential for people who are into business, because they learn theory and techniques of how to properly manage the team, finances and other essential skills. Moreover, it is crucial for start-up entrepreneurs because they can communicate with other students and professors, hence asking for advice as well as preventing common mistakes, which beginners commit. To illustrate, the University of Toronto offers business studies where students can acquire their bachelor’s degree and meet plenty of smart people with who they can interact and possibly coöperate in the future.
At the same time, to be a prosperous business owner, a person does not need to have a diploma in management, however, they need to have a passion and courage to start and keep up their own firm. For example, many famous founders, such as Steve Jobs or Bill Gates did not graduate from a university but dared to launch their own businesses that still exist and their stocks increase continually. Furthermore, enrollment at college or university can be a financial burden, therefore, the more rational solution for many people is to start their business and invest their efforts and finances into it instead of studying.
In conclusion, although a degree in business is a beneficial supplement, I believe that people do not have to acquire one because education is exorbitant and time-consuming, and should run their business whenever they feel that they are ready.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88144618806 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4685785194 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.777777778 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0365508344226 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171433296878 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0139234693527 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251508152033 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00816401238978 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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