It is said that adultrated food is key reason behind detriorated health of all age group masses. How far you agree or disagree with it?
Health is defined as complete fitness of body and complete well being of mind. 'One cannot gain wealth without health' is a common saying. It means that if a person wants to be successful and rich; he or she must have healthy body. Taking balance diet and following healthy and hygenic lifestyle are very important to maintain body fitness. People depends on food to maintain their health but food is adulterated upto large extent. Adulterated food has very bad impact on fitness of body. But is it right to say that adulterated food is the key reason for detrioration of health? Answer to this question is a big 'yes' .
Nowadays adulteration of food is going on a large scale. Companies are adding preservatives and other added flavours to increase their profit without caring about the health of people. The staple foods like wheat and rice are also infested by fungicides and pesticides. According to a survey conducted by fssai, it is clearly and coherently revealed that 63% companies are adding toxic substances to enhance the flavour of their food products.
Moving ahead, adulteration of food has very bad impact on one's health which includes liver cirrhoses, heart diseases, brain tumours, cancer, stomach ulcers and other chronic disorders which are even fatal. Most prevailed disease cancer is progeny of pestcides used on crops to increase yield. A very popular pesticide monocil is one of the major reason of kidney stones. According to a survey conducted by research department of AIIMS, it is revealed that 93% diseases are caused by adulteration of food.
Overall, it is concluded that government should make strict laws to provide healthy and hygenic food to the public. Todays scenario is people are buying food and are paying for their own coffins. There should be complete cooperation between government and public to prevent the worsening of situation. There should be strict implication of laws and all the food manufacturing companies should follow these laws to make the world a better place to live.
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- It is said that adultrated food is key reason behind detriorated health of all age group masses. How far you agree or disagree with it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06567164179 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65528068548 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.448084009 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.85 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139443095904 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450057559819 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539605945466 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799007620055 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034894787601 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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