It is said that celebrities have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behaviours. Do you agree?
It is publicly acknowledged that people in time light have a liability to establish an exemplary image because they have a strong influence on their audiences. In my opinion, I completely believe that a myriad of people looks to these people as an example, however, I partly agree with the statement that they are under an obligation to be a model individual.
Firstly, superstars are also ordinary humans, therefore, they also have their shortcomings and mistakes like the norm. All these elements are a corner of life in which no one can be in full control of their behavior. Accordingly, it is not fair to compel them always living as an example. Moreover, only when they appear with a magnanimous deep in media, will they take pride from their followers, and this action may modify their attitudes. On the contrary, should these influencers go off tracks, their fans will end up in disappointment, some of them not even overcome the mental shock.
On the other hand, when celebrities received warm support from their fans, they should act as a positive paradigm as an effective solution to reciprocate their sentiments and expectations. For example, not until did many singers and actors take up a collection for the government to assist farmers in saline drought areas, that others became more active. Were stars to be a typical model, would they inspire people and contribute to the enhancement of society. Furthermore, being an example will be the most efficacious method to make their reputation. Only by having a useful action in the right place, at the right time, they will get the attention of the press and recognition of audiences easily.
Taking everything into account, celebrities are welcome to lead a role model for their bystanders, and it is advisable if they are partly responsible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99337748344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84860796593 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9357350097 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22257259542 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766700412907 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476518521161 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141361114595 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291063282461 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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