It is true to say that in the new millennium most of the nations struggling with environmental issues.
It is true to say that in the new millennium most of the nations struggling with environmental issues. In such a context, it is claimed that solving environmental problems are beyond the capacity of each country and the general public. However, I acknowledge that some natural problems need global effort, others can be solved efficiently and permanently in the nation concerned and by its people.
On the one hand, there are some environmental problems involving greenhouse gases, global warming, raising sea level etc. which need coordinated actions by all countries. As a case in point, if developed and developing countries do not reduce pumping hazardous pollution into the air along with each other it would be almost impossible to harness global warming and melting polar ice. Therefore, specific global laws should be enacted for targeting these issues.
On the other hand, almost every country faced some environmental issues which can be obviated by the local authorities and environmental planners such as drop littering, deforestation, and various forms of pollution. As an illustration, regarding air pollution, both the government and citizens have to do their best to reduce it. The administrative system has to enhance public transportation to be efficient and punctual and also individuals have to park their vehicles and use buses, trams, and subways instead. There are some other forms of environmental problems such as water pollution which do not need cooperation with other countries. By recycling and dumping waste in sanitary landfills these issues can be addressed inside the country.
To sum up, it is crystal clear that although there is a critical need for solving some types of environmental issues that countries work together, other environmental problems such as aforementioned hazards could be dealing with inside the country concerned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nd the capacity of each country and the general public. However, I acknowledge that some natur...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g with inside the country concerned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, as to, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43493150685 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05638165969 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0775853248 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227940623001 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112086406895 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.258110912465 0.0667982634062 386% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161139282299 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153567623239 0.056905535591 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.