In this day and age, it is widely said that students should give priority to academic classes and avoid studying on the Internet because it is time wasted. However, I totally disagree with that statement due to the advantages of online studying.
First of all, it assists students in building up self-studying skill. Technology and science, along with the strong development of the Internet, leads to abundant resources of documents, which are important to learners. It is not too difficult for them to find out a suitable materials. In addition, students have access to widen their knowledge, not be limited by lessons at school. For instance, if they want to learn a new language, they can search for the learning route, sensible curriculum and available lessons on the Internet.
Additionally, it is undeniable that online studying offers students with flexibility and convenience. They do not have to commute to the campus, which saves not only money but also time. They can arrange and modify their schedule depend on their habits and work. Moreover, they are not disturbed by anyone around themselves when they study at home. Consequently, it enhances their efficiency and capabilities of acknowledging new information.
Last by not least, studying on the Internet contributes in widening their relationship. Joining in a course, they have chance to acquaint new friends and study on a group. Via the Internet, they can be confused with different opinions of each other. Friends on the Internet will help them find out the most appropriate solutions to difficult exercises. As a result, not only do they upgrade their intellectual level, they also broaden their relationship.
In conclusion, although students are advised to prioritize the intensive classes, I believe that studying on the Internet is integral on account of its contribution in self-styding skill, widening relationship and its flexibility. That is the reason why students should balance their time at school and on the Internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'material'?
Suggestion: material
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.271875 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99452462578 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0917664603 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203163368349 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664317094495 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673453903852 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126725360816 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406562060566 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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