It is widely known that despite cars damage the environment, their manufacturer and their use continue to increase. Why is the case? How can this be controlled? KHANH - HOMEWORK - MAY 22
gases created by vehicle impact effectively to the nature, although many people know what the consequence that the vehicle bring to the environmental but they still continue using it.Still there is many negative impact that car gave,we still have some solution to minimize the problem.
the reason why people still using this kind of vehicle because this is the most convenience way for people to travel without attachment, so they prefer these gases fuel car than train and electrical vehicle .People whose using gases vehicle pay the gases bill cheaper than other electrical bills,even they don’t have to book ticket for there own car .Also they can go whatever they want shopping,playing,even camping.And a lot factor to affect them to buy and continuos manufacture the vehicle.And just by now may be there are new car have been invented.
However,there some possible way to restrict this problem.In my opinion the government should increase the price of gases for the resident to quite using these car, increase the number of electrical train to mall or train to work for there resident .by using this stratnergy I belive that this will minimize the gases released out into the ozone layer.Take advantage frome this corona virus diasese government shoud also make up a plan to get rid of the honda vehicle ,plus the 92 gases.I have heard this same kind of stratnergy from Vietnam government they want to delete all the honda car in 2030. Perhaps there is no protest I think they would done this already.
In summarize I think government around the world should take more time to care for the nature than their country proverty.Control the people manufacture the gases vehicle and ask them could they make mor electrical car. And I think they can handle these problem “wish good luck for them”.
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...trical car. And I think they can handle these problem “wish good luck for them”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, still, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99006622517 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67351452704 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.475307201 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.166666667 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162064005393 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07568624346 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037367806183 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957155557187 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273245673058 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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