Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
It is a fact that people living abroad have to face some problems caused by communicating with foreigners; therefore, this situation could lead to conflicts or serious problems. Personally, I completely agree with this statement by my reasons below.
The first reason for this is because oversea people who get trouble with language barrier, often find it harder to express clearly their mind and confess their thinking to native residents. In other words, foreign language could cause the breakdown in understanding between people of different culture. Moreover, those who do not have enough cultural intelligence or are lacking in communication skills might make mistakes with local people . Let take study at school as a typical, oversea students, it was extremely difficult to completely understand and absorb an entire lesson at foreign school even though they were equipped with a huge of academic knowledge before. This result in bad performance of international students, on top of that these students could get stuck in negative emotions when they feel weaker than others.
In addition to the reason above I also believe that people working in other countries have less chance to apply to proper vacancy with a high salary in company because recruitment have a tendency to hire employees who are the same nationality as them. Besides, oversea workers are believed that they are being taken advantage of their labours by paying less than what workers deserve to have. This is an unequal treatment from residents, which turn them into a person with tight budget and bring a negative impact to their living. They will lose their incentive and become the social issues.
In conclusion, dwelling in foreign countries will bring many opportunities but it still has some drawbacks. Hence, comprehending and perceiving those advantages will help people to prepare conscientiously before making their mind to live abroad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ls might make mistakes with local people . Let take study at school as a typical, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30718954248 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76771010161 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643790849673 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.991346843 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136923990846 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486511706429 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528375371162 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869459749635 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345694395313 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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