Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Recently, the phenomenon of living in a foreign country and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, apart from miscellaneous social and practical problems which people may encounter by living in foreign countries, we shouldn’t lose sight of its benefits. In my view, people who experience living in foreign countries instead of their motherlands will face various social and practical difficulties.
Obviously, adaptation with destination culture is one of the most significant problems that individuals who like to settle in foreign countries must find ways to deal with. It is likely that, at first days or perhaps first months, these people will struggle with how to communicate with others even in their everyday greeting. In addition, the education of children in schools and adolescences in universities would become their parents’ concerns in foreign countries.
Moreover, there are many different practical troubles due to low language proficiency. For instance, making appointments by doctors or explaining symptoms of diseases in hospitals would turn to a disaster for people who decide to live in countries with different languages. Despite the fact that doing routine shopping in their own countries is a piece of cake, this matter may become a nightmare in foreign countries.
On the other hand, living in a country rather than native country provides opportunities to individuals who have to speak a foreign language. As a tangible example, being in the atmosphere of foreign language is the best way to learn that language according with linguistics. Thus, becoming bilingual leads to prevent or at least alleviate some age-related diseases in the years to come. Meanwhile, living in other nations paves the way to be accustomed with other cultures as well as widening insights.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on both sides, I am inclined to believe that living in a foreign-language country causes various problems with respect to everyday and social life. Imaging, in the first days of migration, you attend a hospital because of your backache while your language skills is not polished yet. But practitioners prescribe you a dental surgery due to misunderstanding!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, at least, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my view, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41833810888 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09516337028 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.434455618 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.1875 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328945003823 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977683209958 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552009776793 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172060124769 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470326158364 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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