Nowadays the number of people who immigrate to a foreign country because of various reasons, such as higher life quality, educational purposes, and job prospects, is increased, gradually. Some experts claim that speaking in a foreign language plays a vital role in social and practical issues for people who live abroad. I completely agree with this viewpoint and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, as we know a person who accommodates in a foreign country faced with a wide range of emotions, like home-sick, depression, and confusion. These hard feelings can be amplified when immigrants should speak another language and can not understand properly what local people say. Consequently, the risk of psychological diseases amplified which is one of the major social problems in contemporary societies. On the other hand, foreign inhabitants choose another country for different logic, for example, to have better opportunities and prospects in their job. So, if they can not speak fluently, it would make complications to interact with their colleagues and customers, thus the productivity of the person witnessed a downward trend which has undesirable impacts on his/her resume and social life. Having manifested the aforementioned subjects, speaking in a different language from the native language can be the cause of loosing connection with other people, which can lead to the enhancement in the risk of mental illnesses and reducing efficiency. So, people who want to live in a country where residents speak in a different language should learn a foreign language to prevent aforesaid dilemma.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34496124031 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01565582208 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2441530774 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290568639643 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105058002372 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430221360908 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290568639643 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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