Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, more and more people are migrating to new countries to start a new life.
It has been suggested that the language barrier can cause significant problems in their social interactions, as well as, issue in everyday life. I partially agree with this idea, and in this essay I will provide some arguments to support my opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reasons why people believe that the inability to speak a local language can cause serious problems. From a practical point of view, the primary argument supporting this idea is that it will be a difficult to find a job. If an immigrant cannot speak the local language, it is highly unlikely that they will get hired because they will not be able to communicate with colleagues and clients. From a social point of view, another key argument in support of this idea is that it will be difficult to make friends. The result of this is that people will feel lonely, isolated and alienated ,which in turn lead to personal problems such as depression and alcoholism.
However, it must be said there are several arguments against the idea that poor language ability can cause the problem. Perhaps the strongest of these is that English is a universal language. If people can speak english, they might be able to communicate effectively in most countries.
In conclusion, in today’s globalised world, learning a new language is a topic which is a very relevant to modern society. I believe quite strongly that the language barrier can cause some serious issues. If a person moves to another country and they can not speak the language at all, life will be quite difficult for them, both socially and practically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8724137931 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66006937587 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9147233168 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.928571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171246233003 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621193391639 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447084957042 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929581525277 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447400365284 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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