Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that living abroad has become commonplace in the light of globalization. However, a school of thought holds that living overseas could make people suffer from social and practical trouble. In this essay, I will examine the problems associated with this trend before looking at some of its benefits.
On the one hand, individuals moving to another country are likely to face alienation. This can be attributed to discrimination and bullying in certain parts of the world. They are often browbeaten by a group of people as a result of their nationalities and appearances, which makes them reluctant to communicate and become more reserved. Moreover, people staying in a foreign may encounter culture shock. In the long run, this would cause them to become depressed, or even commit suicide.
On the other hand, living in another country is not without benefits. Exposing to sufferings could be a valuable asset to gain experience in a new land. When people brave the problems that they run into in another country, they will have an opportunity to improve various skills such as problem solving ability, flexibility... to help their workflow. Moreover, living abroad also gives individuals connections from all over the world, so they would have an understanding of many cultures and a new light about other nations.
In conclusion, regardless of social and practical problems that people who live overseas are likely to have, it is still a good way for them to experience and gain a wealth of interesting knowledge and skills.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 254 350
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You only need to put two more sentences in second and third paragraphs to get higher marks.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 254 350
No. of Characters: 1257 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.949 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.75 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.86 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12992125984 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87389979272 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2059533831 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128354813361 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04285163016 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299496714615 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817967852296 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217683034142 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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