living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Communicating and working with another language other than your mother tongue, can be a challenging situation for all immigrants and sometimes it can be their nightmare. While I agree that, this is true in practical terms, I believe that some strategies can be used to tackle this problem.
Newcomers always have a lot of problems in their new place, one of the main ones is to communicate with other peoples especially natives in different places include education centres, workplaces and even supermarkets to accommodate their daily routine requirements. This is due to a lot of facts. Firstly, culture trauma which has mentioned as one of the major problems that almost all immigrants experienced at first. Secondly, fear of failure can be mentioned as a crucial factor of the tendency to be silent and be out of the community like schools groups, that is something mainly youngsters are faced with. Finally, there are some facts relating to human personality. That is the majority of people need time to overcome their fear of speaking in front of people and that can be more challenging in new countries with a different language and people.
I believe people can overcome this situation with some patience, they should be optimistic about their new living place and try to be part of local and small society like schools' group without fear of failure, moreover, they should make an effort to improve their language by taking part in classes or using some self-study methods. In this way, they will be better at communicating with people.
In conclusion, although living in new countries with new people and different languages can be seen as catastrophe situation in some ways, I believe that patient people can overcome to its hardships by some strictness and perseverance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06779661017 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82949540381 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535593220339 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.3757043549 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.909090909 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140064977665 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624307427694 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041614186832 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102966693448 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022630527795 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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