Local governments are pushing companies to move from large cities to regional locations. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In a growing number of countries, it has been seen that regional governments have been encouraging businesses to relocate from metropolises to less developed areas. While the movement of companies to regional areas can boost employment and expand those places, businesses might face some challenges in terms of employing a skilled workforce and profits which might constitute relevant disadvantages.
On the one hand, the decision of local Governments to attract businesses to regional areas is likely to be economically and socially advantageous for locals. With regards to the former, the establishment of new industries in non-centralised areas, such as towns, villages or more rural places undoubtedly results in more jobs and can be a solution for high unemployment rates seen outside urban areas. Also, more jobs opportunities mean a higher investment in those areas, namely in the construction of new development projects such as houses, schools and hospitals as the number of inhabitants is likely to increase and so will their basic needs. Taking Telford as an example, one of the fastest-growing towns in the UK shows how the movement of businesses from megacities in this case Birmingham, has allowed the expansion of other areas in the country, therefore improving, the national welfare. Consequently, quality of life is enhanced in regional areas which thanks to new industries are developed and so attract more people to live and work.
On the other hand, companies which relocate to regional areas might face pertinent challenges. Firstly, because they are moving to more underpopulated areas, they are less likely to find a highly-skilled workforce. Nowadays, there is no doubt that students and qualified professionals tend to choose well-developed cities because they offer both high-standard universities and better career opportunities, Secondly, companies who move to regional areas may risk a profit growth. This is due to the fact that the former lacks infrastructure such as roads and railways necessary to transport materials for industries. Taking the distribution of ports as an example, these are mostly located next to cities and the sea turning the trade of goods and services far more accessible, quicker and thus cheaper in comparison to more remote areas. Therefore, regional areas may lack essential features that might compromise the profitability of businesses.
In conclusion, there are multiple reasons for the benefit of the movement of businesses to regional areas. However, companies which choose to relocate can face some critical drawbacks which may deter their progress in the future.
- Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree? 73
- Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Local governments are pushing companies to move from large cities to regional locations. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- In some countries, children under 16 years old are not allowed to leave school by law and get full-time work. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion. 73
- Some people believe that employees should stay in the same job for the rest of their lives Others think they should switch jobs at least once during their career To what extent do you agree disagree Partially agree with both views 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 520, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lacks'' or 'lack's'?
Suggestion: lacks'; lack's
...This is due to the fact that the former lacks infrastructure such as roads and railwa...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mise the profitability of businesses. In conclusion, there are multiple reason...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2240.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50368550369 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15559474484 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3716730062 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13587636035 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507152190813 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357236585374 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914568859205 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169891049197 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.