Economic progress is often used to measure a country's success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?
Opinions are divided regarding the factors that make a country great. In my opinion, economic growth does not necessarily make a nation successful meaning that other factors namely education and health are equally important because they not only improve standards of living but also increase productivity. This essay will discuss how economic and social progress are both crucial for the development of a nation.
There is no doubt that access to education and health should be considered when measuring a country's success. This is because these elements often have a huge impact on standards of living and productivity. For instance, nations offering a high-quality educational system are likely to get a much more skilled workforce. As a result, individuals potentially get better jobs, earn higher salaries and become more productive. Also, investment in prevention and cures for diseases like vaccination and cancer treatment leads to a much healthier and consequently more active and productive society.
Furthermore, financial growth and human development are equally important and they rely on each other to make a country great. Although the production of goods and services is necessary to generate wealth and employment, it is also crucial to consider how much of that money is invested in society in a way that makes people more literate, healthier and productive. For example, developed countries such as Sweden and Norway show reasonable levels of gross domestic product (GDP) but in addition to that Governments invest huge amounts of money on medical assistance and free primary and secondary education. As a result, they are considered rich nations offering good quality of life to its citizens and showing high levels of productivity.
In summary, I think that a country cannot be considered successful just by its financial progress. On the contrary, other factors namely access to education and health are also vital to become a nation powerful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in summary, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41100323625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90832837165 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7993855573 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268195376155 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936233331724 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073335097934 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175819695232 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601301406659 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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