For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?
One of the most controversial issued today relates to globalization and competitive. Globalization makes change human life. People decided to live with science, technology and business. But we have great history about fine arts.in this essay I am going to examine both pint of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason believing this is that in the present world peoples involve competitive economic pattern. They want to go luxury life. They collect more money and try to forget their past relationship. Science will help more forward present society and if we eliminate science we could not have airplane, computers, telephones, electricity, and vehicles. In the modern society science plays more and more an important role in human life. Science helps us to understand our world clearly. The development of science brings us lot of benefits.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case.it is often argued that in fact art is more important and useful. We have great history about art. Arts teach us to live happily. Art is the subject of imagination and learn how to communicate. The world art mention that it is about the poetry, music, dancing painting.. etc. we can’t think life without music, cooking, painting , craft, drawing,books..etc. without arts we make a robots .science brought us to war, devastation, competition, hectic lives ,unhappiness, throughout the developed world. Their for, Government should organize art competition and encourage young artist .government invest money for art relates project such as organizing workshops, free art exhibition..ect.
In conclusion, both are very important society. It helps us to live happily.
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- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.What do you think are the causes of 84
- The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.157575757576 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0939393939394 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0363636363636 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0636363636364 0.0437548338989 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0878787878788 0.122226691241 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0212121212121 0.0403226058552 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0581709134 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0575757575758 0.0861772015684 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121212121212 0.021408717616 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00606060606061 0.011925033212 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1792.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35460992908 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375886524823 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308510638298 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202127659574 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148936170213 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0581709134 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 70.3045624793 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.8181818182 20.7743622355 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.06760014 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8181818182 20.7743622355 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.814263465372 45% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.669245648 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.48235294118 1.69124875643 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404716589293 0.332605444948 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.079819247069 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710067067627 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.404955651411 0.534860350844 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122449887936 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121374237492 0.134430193775 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617813185194 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245766537941 0.324371583561 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0790740765251 0.0638462369009 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239634882195 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934856282419 0.058150111329 161% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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