A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks
Nowadays Tourism has generated a significant portion of national income for many countries. Although this industry has some drawbacks, I would consider that there are more benefits.
On the one hand, tourism can be highly problematic for many reasons. One of the key disadvantages is littering the environment. For example, plastic bottles, nylon bags are directly taken out into water and soil which has enormous impacts on the beauty and safety of landscape or historical areas as well as the life of some animals. Another significant drawback is that many countries witnessed a dramatic growth in the number of society's vices which is an alarming and serious problem. If this problem is not handled in time, The number of tourists will dwindle due to unsafe destinations.
On the other hand, I would argue the disadvantages of the tourism industry pale in comparison with the benefits. Firstly, tourism is considered the main source of earnings for local authorities as well as local people, in rich tourism potential places all over the world, especially in developing countries. This way, tourism yields supporting the country’s economy. The second advantage that should be taken into consideration is the promotion of the nation’s tradition and culture. The more tourists are attracted, the easier it is.
In conclusion, despite several drawbacks that tourism has, it seems to me that they are not far outweighed by potential benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30735930736 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90613254029 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8603738453 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3076923077 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237697523559 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732462727156 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700106707148 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129044377526 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823616891049 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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