As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions to these problems?
Nowadays, there is widespread concern about the disadvantages of rapid urbanization. In fact, young citizens have undergone several issues relating to urbanizing. Lacking occupations and affordable houses seem to be the most prominent problem that is a result of rapid and unsustainable urbanization. In this essay, these issues and solutions will be presented.
It is obvious that the working ability of pudding employees has not met the demand of the developing economy when the mega cities have been expanded and developed rapidly and continuously. It is a result of the unsustainable growth and neglect to educate and improve the quality of the workforce. As a result, it is difficult for youth citizens to find suitable jobs and there is still a lack of workforce in the companies.
Besides, the expansion of metropolis cities leads to house prices escalating sharply which makes it impossible for youth individuals to buy one. In addition, not only the residential properties but also human needs such as health care, education, etc have been hardly accessible.
To cope with these urbanization obstacles, it is necessary for both the government and youth citizens to institute the proper plans of action.
Firstly, Government should enact a law to control the mechanism of buying and selling apartments in which the cost of them depends on people's income. Moreover, the interest on the loans of the youth citizens which is used to buy the dwellings should be reduced. In terms of the young workforce, it is crucial to prepare well to adapt to the occupations' responsibilities. For example, taking the specialized courses such as computer skills, communication skills, etc that are necessary to the job's requirement. In addition, the education system needs to implement education on youngsters the working skills as soon as being in high school
In conclusion, the rapid expansion of cities is the reason for job and housing shortages for younger generations. These obstacles might be well resolved only when the government and employers implement the proper plans of action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
...n skills, etc that are necessary to the jobs requirement. In addition, the education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26726726727 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04631824168 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9506778849 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138579102694 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404965765042 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294328231272 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680872425224 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271563000633 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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