As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions to these problems?
Among the criteria that today’s society aims to achieve, growth appears to be obvious. Coming with growth, however, are ongoing issues that concern the young generation and are often neglected or yet to be discussed at length. This essay attempts to look at the two major of them as well as to propose appropriate measures.
The first one is an increase in stress among young citizens, as they suffer from the fear of feeling insufficient. This phenomenon is a form on which the relentless fight over resources for thousands of years takes, now worsening that the growth of population comes without a sufficient increase in resources. The second issue is a neverending increase in pollution and waste, which in theory concerns not only young citizens but in reality, they are to be held accountable the most. The modern lifestyle promotes convenience, but at the cost of destruction caused to nature. Both issues’ consequences go against the strive of modern global citizens.
To solve the first problem, authorities have a lot of measures to take. For instance, appropriate work allocation and subsidies may reassure citizens of their financial situations and alleviate their insecurities. Universities can also hold in-depth discussions on the matter, guiding the young generation towards a more positive reality. The authority, as well, has the major duty to lessen pollution, and ultimately bring it to an end. Campaigns need to be thoughtfully carried out and laws must be passed, so that the matter can be taken with emphasized seriousness.
All in all, the growth of cities inevitably comes with drawbacks such as increased stress and pollution, both posing obstacles to the growth of humanity itself. However, these issues can be taken care of by responsible authorities, should appropriate measures are passed.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e. Both issues’ consequences go against the strive of modern global citizens. To solve th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26369863014 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94974761254 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8516857555 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.466666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129654877111 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380539852016 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285873704915 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741440469275 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236725257939 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 613, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e. Both issues’ consequences go against the strive of modern global citizens. To solve th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26369863014 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94974761254 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8516857555 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.466666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129654877111 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380539852016 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285873704915 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741440469275 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236725257939 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.