majority of developed countries prefer to pay attention as well as spent tremendous proportion of their health budgets on purchasing modern equipment, likewise medical procedures. Meanwhile some people argue, t the sponsorship from government should be spent instead on health education.
Nowadays, majority of developed countries prefer to pay attention as well as spent tremendous proportion of their health budgets on purchasing modern equipment, likewise medical procedures. Meanwhile some people argue, that the sponsorship from government should be spent instead on health education. This essay will concentrate on the obvious aims of this trend, moreover on several instances from my knowledge and experience.
Enhancement the quantity of modern and expensive technologies can battle different deadly diseases and raise medicine to high level. According to this advantage authorities try to spent much money and fend off diseases before they arise. Furthermore, decrease human beings dying of treatable diseases as well as provide medical services to the entire population without big queue.
One of the chief purpose of the provision of financial support for health education is expanding the health workforce. In other words ,increasing the health practitioners play a very important role in the promotion health initiatives which can improve measures such as vaccination drives and educational campaigns which help prevent contagious diseases. Due to this tendency, preventive care promote healthy life styles as well as healthy ageing.
To conclude, i think that spending financial budget for medicine and also for health education is irreplaceable help for patients and for increasing the number of high-qualified doctors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, while, i think, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82325581395 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98089826426 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4286771615 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37386752288 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14166782073 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215185044548 0.0667982634062 322% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211689331129 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.269926610386 0.056905535591 474% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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