In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as valuable work experience.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is commented that children should enjoy their life to performing lots of task like playing, learning instead of doing labour work. A section of society perceive that children should do some type of labour work which increase their work experience. I completely disassociate myself from this point of view. I believe that children do not need to take work experience since their childhood. Ideas enunciated further in my discourse will support my point of view.
Discussing few points to prove my disagreement, the foremost one is that take education in childhood is an imperative for children. Education plays an indispensable role in life of human being. Basic knowledge and ability should be acquire by children before join any work industry because advance work is not possible on field without it. For instance, if any children start mechanical work in any organisation he/she can not perform an excellent task as compare to knowledgeable mechanical engineer. Thus, to become an expert in any field children should focus on study instead of work.
Additionally, I also perceive that children have less ability to understand any paid work in work field. I think this time is so early for children. Children should enjoy their life in activity like playing, listening song, reading books rather than focus on work. As well as, they have to learn good virtues, manners, discipline from their parents and adult persons.
However, a diminutive section of society tend to perceive that to do any work education do not play main role. Children can learn much more in their life from work experience rather than any books.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">In conclusion, doing work can fetch a human good amount of experience and the so called benefits like being responsible and mature. However, I strongly believe that children should be made to learn at schools and universities before pushing them into real world. More emphasis on the development of cognitive skills should be given rather than gaining experience at a very tender age</span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of tasks'.
Suggestion: lots of tasks
...n should enjoy their life to performing lots of task like playing, learning instead of doing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'acquired'?
Suggestion: acquired
.... Basic knowledge and ability should be acquire by children before join any work indust...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ork experience rather than any books. ^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24698795181 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93012072963 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6924756545 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6842105263 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240780141524 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854157880359 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748870571095 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147432784522 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629527982861 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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