In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported foood? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
It is true that the consumption of imported foood has increased in recent years. The reasons for this trend are varied and there are some effective measures to encourage people to purchase food produced locally
There are two main reasons why more and more people are purchasing imported foodstuffs. First, the taxes on food items from abroad has reduce significantly thanks to the advent of Free Trade Agreements (FTA), which allows foreign manufactured food companies to have countless opportunities to appoach local customers. This means that people will have more options to choose, enabling them to enjoy a wide range of foodstuffs from different parts of the globe with cheaper prices. Second growing prosperity and a rise in the living standards in many countries has stimulated people’s demand for pricey foreign food products that local companies are unable to produce in order to vary their diet or experiment with new recipes. For example, with greater disposable income, most Vietnamese people now are able to enjoy Kiwis- a type of fruit commomly grown in Western countries.
There are two initiatives that should be taken to encourage the consumption of local food. The governments should launch national campaigns which call out their citizens to prioritise purchasing food produce locally. This might gradually eliminate the need to import foodstuffs from other countries, positively affecting the national economic expansion. Additonally, local manufacturers should invest more money in advanced technologies in the manufacturing process in order to ensure that their products always look fresh and clean. By doing this, consumers would be motivated to choose their products as reliable alternative for foreign food products in terms of quality and delicious taste.
In conclusion, there are several reasons for the increasing prevalence of improted food products and some approaches should be taken immediately to motivate consumers to buy local food products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52786885246 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82738936301 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4030973475 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374758820442 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123757424339 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723001543049 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220531468081 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298247759763 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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