In many countries, paying for things using mobile phones (cellphones) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
There is notion that smartphone devices offering many applications to pay things have been more favourable in numerous countries. I personally believe that the issue will bring significant benefits which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
Regarding the remarkable positive views, online electronic payment in mobile devices will probably allow people to easily purchase products from other countries. To illustrate, paying through PayPal, cooperating with millions of online stores in global markets, might save the consumers’ time to convert the currency so as to purchasing imported stuff. Furthermore, this might be efficient and flexible system for the users to pay regular bills such as tuition fees and taxes. This is because they not need stand in long queue and risk for severe consequences from paying such bills over the date.
On the other hand, we must consider that digital wallets rely much on the internet access. If there are network and power outages, many transactions could be in trouble. Needless to say, the advanced areas which provide mobile network equipment and good internet connection could use the application. In addition, the lack of security features contributes high probabililty to experience data leakage should be on the first attention. Since the users are highly required to add their personal data and all transactions are recorded, so that, the cyber-crime attacks may hijack the data and bribe the savings.
In conclusion, while selecting payments via mobile apps brings some noticeable disadvantages, I would contradict that the applications offer an instant purchase to shop around the world and simplify the business transaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...consumers’ time to convert the currency so as to purchasing imported stuff. Furthermore,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53461538462 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87091876517 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.701927605 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144220194993 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469938303358 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056142604101 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776697379084 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401891375795 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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