In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Youth obesity is the major inadvertent issues that are omnipresent. There are considerable reasons for such this phenomenal, but the prominent reason could be the eating habits due to the societal improvement. Each party shall be compromised to tackle this issue.
The youth obesity is the common issues around the world. This issue has been raised due to the inadvertently structured by the rapid development of society. The inept preparation for the meals by busily working parents can be the reason for youth obesity, or it can be caused by the relatively incremental of unhealthy foods. Since removal of the adults guidance would result children to eat unhealthy foods, such as junk foods, which would have low in nutrition values compared to high calories.
Despite considerable reasons are having a prevalent affect, the prominent reason would be habitual eating preferences. The society development has ubiquitous influence on the hasty eating habits, and which provide inadequate time for exercises. The addiction for stimulative taste and the availability of high calorie containing food have inadvertently jeopardize the children's health. With the cumulative of those factors have prevailing issues.
Since this issue is the universal target, each party shall be solved at their levels. Initially, parents are the one who can directly influence on children's eating habits since their eating preferences would be based on family eating styles. Parents can prepare each meal to protect children from eating unhealthy meals, and which will lead to healthy eating habits by eating healthy meals constantly. Meanwhile the local council and local government could restrict the hours of selling junk foods to children for junk food restaurants. In Australia, most of junk food restaurants do not sell any junk foods from 4 to 6pm to school children, which can be seen as a great example for the restriction of youth consumption in unhealthy foods. Therefore, all the various methods can be sought to prevent the youth obesity.
In conclusion, the current prominent issue is the youth obesity which have had caused by several factors, the primary causes would be the children's eating habits. This issue can be solved separately by dealt at different levels. The local government can impose the regulation to restrict the selling hours to children to junk food restaurants, whereas parents can provide the healthy meals at every costs to prevent further youth obesity in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jeopardized'.
Suggestion: jeopardized
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289044289044 0.247107183377 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.151515151515 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107226107226 0.0946595960268 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.025641025641 0.0501214627716 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00699300699301 0.0437548338989 16% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.100233100233 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0536130536131 0.0403226058552 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75839637245 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034965034965 0.0326793684256 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11655011655 0.0861772015684 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.044289044289 0.021408717616 207% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.016317016317 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2488.0 1933.35771543 129% => OK
No of words: 394.0 316.048096192 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31472081218 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.416243654822 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307106598985 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190355329949 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152284263959 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75839637245 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484771573604 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.2585091864 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5897922964 49.517814964 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.814263465372 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 50.4106598985 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.40506329114 1.69124875643 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264165297802 0.332605444948 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117323042072 0.102741220458 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704420190951 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532042939356 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139685387884 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113641144552 0.134430193775 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437687378869 0.0742795772207 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.439648271887 0.324371583561 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0851109724932 0.0638462369009 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196688072434 0.228012699653 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00759980390693 0.058150111329 13% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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