In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes(suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?
Just as English found its way into becoming a language commonly spoken and understood, western clothing started finding its way into our daily lives. Nowadays, many people, especially youngsters, prefer western clothing whereas a handful believe that traditional attire represents the culture and identity. In my opinion, I feel adapting the western fashion is a negative effect and the reasons will be explained in this essay.
There are several reasons for the increasing popularity of western clothing. One of them is high status. Western styles have become a symbol of status in many societies which has its roots from the colonial era where looking like the colonizers was considered a sign of affluence and influence. In many places, western clothing is considered a sign of good fortune, quality education, and financial status. furthermore, many feel modern dressing is much comfortable as well as practical. It is easier to perform different kinds of tasks from running errands to performing on stage wearing jeans rather than a saree or churidar.
However, I believe, traditional clothes, on the other hand, should not be completely discarded. They symbolize our culture and identity and it is necessary to preserve them. These customs were followed by our ancestors for ages and if we do not promote them it is likely that they may become extinct. Moreover, national dresses portray unity. Research showed that youngsters wearing traditional clothes irrespective of western fashion pressure showed fewer emotional problems. The reason was that they were more attached to their ancestral customs and traditions.
In conclusion, I believe it is important to have a balance in all things, and hence it is inappropriate for one to completely set aside their traditional clothes and become a follower of western styles or vice-versa. We should follow the new trends but not shy away from our culture which helps to promote our culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27419354839 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81176545501 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3910332722 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1764705882 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253042234864 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675355419351 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604041149368 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143388032671 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248445009035 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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