In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses such as the food and drink industry. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
Perhaps, there is no topic of controversy in this contemporary society worth debating as the matter of industrialization. Indeed, people's views differ greatly as whether plastic containers are increasingly ubiquitous in an enormous volume of businesses' consumption, specifically in food and drink industry. To the best of my knowledge, the demerits of this phenomenon overshadow its merits.
To start with, there is no shadow of a doubt that the notion holds its intelligible gains. For the first part, plastics wrappers make a significant contribution to industrial field thanks to its versatility and durability . It is a common belief that consumers can utilize plastic containers in a wide variety of purposes, namely in packaging goods and storing foods. Additionally, plastic- wrappers are considered as affordable items. In simple words, utilizing plastic packaging is likely to play vital role in not only minimizing production cost but also economizing the market price. For instance, when comparing the food price between a plastic-used restaurant and anon plastic-used one , the latter is likely to be higher.
However, the phenomenon might not be totally free from its long-term repercussions. To be clear, plastic's usage has constantly posed an arduous challenge for human, along with the earth. The mass consumption of plastics adversely affects on environment, specifically soil and water pollution. Factories,as an example, have no attitude towards their irresponsible behavior on environmental issues,in fact, they continuously produce plastics and apply no waste treatment. As a result, human life is put in jeopardy. Individuals have to suffer from an accelerating problems such as health implication and natural disasters which caused by solution.
In summary, it is still a matter of deliberation whether plastic containers play an important role in our lives. Yet, the phenomenon's drawbacks is considered to outweigh its preeminence.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-12-09 | minomeow12 | 84 | view |
| 2021-10-27 | Nguyen Thi Tuong Vy | 70 | view |
| 2021-10-27 | tamle | 84 | view |
| 2021-08-25 | Ngoctranthifoe07@ | 84 | view |
| 2021-08-13 | dinhthu05 | 89 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...thanks to its versatility and durability . It is a common belief that consumers ca...
^^
Line 2, column 691, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sed restaurant and anon plastic-used one , the latter is likely to be higher. How...
^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...ally soil and water pollution. Factories,as an example, have no attitude towards th...
^^^
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...onsible behavior on environmental issues,in fact, they continuously produce plastic...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, for instance, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65646258503 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32128617212 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656462585034 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5341136645 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191510217006 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534066700812 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321471294019 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110604708732 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227380654153 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.