In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses such as the food and drink industry. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
It is true that plastic containers have grown more common than ever in several nations. They're utilized in a variety of industries, including the food and beverage sector. Despite some obvious advantages of this trend, I would argue that these are outweighed by the downsides.
On one hand, there are two major benefits when using plastic bags for foodstuffs. Firstly, it is more convenient, lighter and easier for people who are living at the fast pace of modern life. Since employees have to work in the early morning and have few breaks so they have less time to eat, fast-food chains are increasingly popular worldwide and most of them tend to keep their food and drinks in plastic containers. Take Starbucks, for example, it is a well-known brand for drinks, especially coffee, therefore, many workers love to have a cup of coffee for more energy and improve concentration during work. Moreover, it is not breakable and consumers just need to put the plastics in a dustbin when they are done. Throwaway knives, forks and plates are ubiquitous in picnics and outdoor eating.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant than such advantages. One reason is that the decomposition of waste plastic will encounter more difficulties due to the fact that millions of different plastics are still thrown away every year. As a result, the amount of carbon dioxide from the burning process will be emitted more than ever, along with the emissions from various means of transportation each day will make the earth hotter which causes floods, drought, earthquakes to happen more often. Furthermore, many individuals who are in a hurry or do not have the habit of putting garbage in the right place will likely throw all the used plastic containers on the streets, hence, when it rains, it will get stuck in the sewers, blocking the circulation of rainwater and causing floods inside the city. Besides, travellers will not be attracted to places that are filled with plastic waste on every street corner and even famous tourist destinations.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of introducing plastic packaging for the food and drink industry in various enterprises nowadays are more significant than the positive ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: They're
...re common than ever in several nations. Theyre utilized in a variety of industries, in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72028233829 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605333333333 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.237881517 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312546340064 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872291793481 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599356473357 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179286272533 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020502352278 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.