In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a view that, in developing countries some people receive a exceedingly high pay. While some people believe this is a great approach I have a view that it should be limited to a certain degree.
Firstly, high paid jobs are not easy to achieve. This is because, people spend a lot of money on education to get a degree which is a prerequisite for such jobs. A person earning more money would be able to afford luxury goods hence boosting the economy. In addition, high salary is an impetus which drives employees to be efficient and productive. Besides motivation, high salaries makes the employees feel more valued in their organization.
However, limiting high salaries is crucial to overall development of the country. As, this would enable more funding to public services and, in turn, benefiting the society. For instance, if the government puts a limit on earnings of people, then poor people may receive greater pay and thus opening doors for opportunities of growth. Moreover, caping high salaries from rich would prevent the rich from gaining unfair advantage in the society and this money could be used to provide monetary services to blue collar employees or should be invested in latest technology which would boost the growth.
In conclusion, although high salaries are beneficial in aspects of satisfaction and galvanize people to aim for more than good enough. The growth of country on a whole which is a result of limiting salaries outweigh the advantages of high pay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e which is a result of limiting salaries outweigh the advantages of high pay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.992 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70068435771 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4039305314 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288841321177 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106891702138 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616297222518 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19987490257 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629370154562 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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