In many countries today, both men and women need work full time. Therefore, some proper think men and women should share household tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There are diverging views about whether should men and women share household tasks equally. While some oppose the idea of they should take the disproportional of household tasks.
To a certain extent, men and women should undertake the same amount of household tasks. It is a modern society, all of us are pursuing balance and fairness. People should undertake the same proportion of responsibility no matter which gender. For example, there are many couple choose to share out the work and have collaboration, such us if one of them make dinner, then the other one will wash dishes. Furthermore, those supporters believe jobs of most of women are low-tech and easy, different from works of men which are hard and complex. One of the most obvious phenomenon is that teachers of kindergartens are women , which is much more easy comparing with policemen who are working on the front lines. However this thing is rather short-sighted because it misunderstand most of women.
It is necessary of men to undertake more proportion of household tasks. Different from ancient, the only task of women were stay at home and do chores. Nowadays, the mainstream among society has changed completely, all the women are working as the same as men. For instance, in army, there is always no difference between genders and all the female soldiers do the same job as male soldiers, and they even compete with others. In addition, women generally have weaker physical strength than men. under the circumstance which male and female doing the same jobs and having competition, female will have less attention left and the feel of exhaustion will be more significant. All of these reasons have shown it is better of male to shoulder more responsibility of household tasks.
Although it seems true that women and men should share the same proportion of household tasks, it is more reasonable of male shoulder more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd women share household tasks equally. While some oppose the idea of they should tak...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun couple seems to be countable; consider using: 'many couples'.
Suggestion: many couples
...er which gender. For example, there are many couple choose to share out the work and have c...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
...rmore, those supporters believe jobs of most of women are low-tech and easy, different from w...
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Line 3, column 622, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that teachers of kindergartens are women , which is much more easy comparing with ...
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Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...men who are working on the front lines. However this thing is rather short-sighted beca...
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'misunderstands'?
Suggestion: misunderstands
...hing is rather short-sighted because it misunderstand most of women. It is necessary of me...
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Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the women') or simply say ''most women''.
Suggestion: most of the women; most women
... short-sighted because it misunderstand most of women. It is necessary of men to undertake...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'staid', 'stayed'.
Suggestion: staid; stayed
...om ancient, the only task of women were stay at home and do chores. Nowadays, the ma...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Under
...have weaker physical strength than men. under the circumstance which male and female ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01898734177 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75418711724 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3560443361 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282942512327 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106007586854 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868896679233 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205812559775 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510358270057 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.