Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have different views about how government evaluates the role of economic growth in the country. While some believe economic progress is the most important concern of the government, I concur that the development of other factors such as education quality and happiness of citizens are equal to.
It is obviously true that economic growth is an essential goal in the development of a country. Firstly, a higher economy ensures job creations and better salaries for worker. It not only improves the living quality of all residents, but also reduce the crime rate because some poor people with a meaner income might sort to commit to crime. Secondly, a wealthy economy provides an abundant sources for government to invest infrastructure, schools, hospitals and transport network. This results in the place of this country in the global stage in terms of politic influence and other aspects.
Apart from convinced arguments mentioned above, I personally argue that education system and the well-being of citizens should be given the same importance as economy. High-quality education system should be consider as one of most priority concern because it ensures a sustainable development of a nation. This contributes a well-qualified workforce for the country in the future. It also guarantee the moral standard in society because of good behaviors that students are taught in lectures in schools. The government should pay enough attention to the spiritual life of all their residents whether they are living in a happy life or under an intangible press.
In conclusion, though there are many valued reasons why many support that economic progress is most important target for a country, I advocate other factors should be given the same priority as economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
... a wealthy economy provides an abundant sources for government to invest infrastructure...
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Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...High-quality education system should be consider as one of most priority concern because...
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Message: Did you mean 'guarantees'?
Suggestion: guarantees
... for the country in the future. It also guarantee the moral standard in society because o...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun support seems to be countable; consider using: 'many supports'.
Suggestion: many supports
...hough there are many valued reasons why many support that economic progress is most importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27304964539 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83100677608 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4087107605 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229356976706 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713929045306 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649557282555 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155288019959 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742369335262 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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