Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
Sugar is one of the substances of most drink products and manufactured food which use more than average in these products. High levels of sugar can threaten the health of people and cause many diseases. In my opinion, companies can increase price of the sugary products that make people less consume sugar.
As a good reason if a person consumes high levels of sugar either daily or weekly it causes many health problems. Not only has bad effects in the long term and cause different blood illnesses such as high blood sugar, diabetes, and increased fat but also, in the short term has dangerous effects on your heart and might heart attack. Hence, people should try to control their sugar consumption and have a sugar diet for most of their food or drink consumption.
Another point is companies and producers that produce sugary drinks and food can raise the price of drinks and food that use more sugar. all companies should notice people's health and must care about it. they can set a rule if the sugar exceeds the limit people should pay extra money for drink or food. This makes people reduce their consumption of high levels of sugar.
In conclusion, although sugary drinks are harmful to health people like them and if use these goods make addicted to them. It caused various sugar diseases that in the future will harm themselves. One way that can prevent the consumption of people is to increase the price of sugary goods. With this method, most people don’t use it except for their passion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...of drinks and food that use more sugar. all companies should notice peoples health ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, except for, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75190839695 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24608186584 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526717557252 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8388218363 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406804424296 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153946462899 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855483741095 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273959865244 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117637027504 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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