Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
The consumption of fast food and instant drink, which has detrimental impacts on people’s health, has been drastically increased in order to cope with the fast-paced lifestyle of modern days. Certain groups in the society propose that the authority needs to impose the consumerism law to restrict the over-consumption of these unhealthy snacks. In my view, I strongly oppose this proposal. I believe there might be some alternatives to tackle this problem and my conviction will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, I believe it is better to utilize other substitutes in place of sugar rather than pricing up. If the price of sugar is raised, the cost of all sugar-related products such as bread, cake and even Coca-Cola would plummet as well, and it could pose a threat to low-socioeconomic status households. In lieu of sugar, sugar-free sweeteners, which are less harmful but still scrumptious, can be introduced into the dishes. Moreover, raising public awareness programs to the pernicious effect of sugar-rich junk food and liquor could acquaint the patrons with healthier and more nutritious diets and make them consume less sugary food. Besides, enforcing to pay the tax on consumerism is no use, since it is the nature of human beings that they would willingly spend their money on the things they love, no matter how the value goes up.
However, it is unavoidable that consuming an enormous amount of sweet treats may give rise to serious health consequences of diabetes or hypertension, which will eventually cause heart disease and have adverse influences on one’s daily life. With the soaring cost, it is agreeable that certain health hazards of sugar could be under the control up to some extent.
To sum up, the practice of consuming sugary items has been in demand and threatens the health of the community from day to day. Nonetheless, instead of raising the prices up, I believe that other practical countermeasures like hosting education campaigns or usage of sweeteners are more applicable to reduce the sugar consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, well, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17804154303 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94142674572 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635014836795 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9491214984 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.230769231 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238662001178 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729482351876 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497203621406 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122966922741 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461254900043 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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