Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that the price of sugary products should be increased due to their effect on customers’ health. While I agree that overuse of sugary products causes health problems, increasing the price of them may produce adverse consequences.
On the one hand, I believe that sugary products cause health problems. There are numerous evidences that people who takes high sugar food and drinks possibly suffer from a range of health issues, such as obesity, because the calories from those products cannot be reduced by daily activity. For instance, children who usually use soft drinks like coke day by day have to face with weight problem because of redundant calories. Furthermore, the scientists warn that if sugar in the blood is increased quickly, it might cause a negative effect on emotions. In other words, consuming a high level of sugar products not only produce health problems but also harm mental health.
The impact of making sugary products more expensive will harm the profit of the sugar industry. The huge income of large firms that provide famous sugary products such as Coca-Cola and Pepsi is the result of a long process of research and development that cost a large amount of money. For example, if this action happens, the number of customers, as well as the income, will be decreased strongly. The consequence not only affects the production company but also related parties who are involved in the production process for example farmers who plant and harvest sugarcane trees and retailers who distribute the products. Furthermore, it may cause a large inventory that damages directly to multiple aspects of a country from agriculture to the economy like the domino effect.
In conclusion, I believe that increasing the price of sugar products is not an effective way, people should be aware of the risks of overtaking high level of sugar food and drink.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09646302251 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57815261315 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549839228296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9561258833 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369100262402 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137337118637 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926969264021 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242689166747 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670157155826 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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