Many museums and historical sites are mainly used by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent decades, travelling has gained in popularity thanks to the development of global and domestic tourism activities. It is believed that there is a growing trend in visiting museum and historical site among visitors while local people are not really interested in. There are reasons to explain this trend and I reckon that authorities play important role in attracting more local citizens by various solutions.
The reasons why tourists pay more attention to cultural and historical sites are various. First, museums and historical sites are the most popularly advertised and introduced to tourists more than local people. Visitors can easily access information about these places on the internet or tourist information desks all over the areas. As a result, once visitors do a research on their visiting places, they can always come up with museums and other well-known sites. Second, people in general prefer discovering new cultures and stories than their existing ones. Take cultural museums as an example, people in local area assume that exhibitions shown in museums are entirely familiar so they are not urged to come and discover more.
There are a wide range of solutions that local government should apply to encourage their citizens to pay a visit to these places. First, authorities should enhance cultural and historical propaganda and advertising activities in order to attract public attention. For instance, schools organise museum tours for their students as extra-curricular so that young citizens would have the chance to experience their local cultures and history. Additionally, entrance fees to these sites should be free of charge or generously reduced for their local people. As a result, authorities would take large public attention to those tourism sites.
In conclusion, cultural and historical sites are receiving more attention by tourists due to many reasons. However, it is not without solutions that local government can take to modify this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, second, so, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44051446945 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77931825465 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2338491981 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305869654613 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101922534434 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595008903771 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190128369713 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353680339464 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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