There exists a weird phenomenon in the tourist industry that visitors of famous tourist attractions such as museums and historical sites normally do not come from local but from another region or country. There are many factors why local people are not willing to visit and few measures can be implemented to deal this this issue.
On the one hand, one of the reasons why local residents would not hang out at those tourist attractions simply because the ticket price are too expensive to afford. Many of them hold that the same amount of money could be saved for other meaningful activities. However, the management cost and maintaining expenses does require a lot of revenue to balance, thus the ticket price stays the same all the time, resulting proportion of local visitors hovers at a relatively small amount. Furthermore, many citizens have already lose interest and got used to the existence of these tourist sites, hanging out at this place seems like a waste of time, besides, these buildings would be sardine-packed with visitors which means it’s hard to take a good look at the exhibits.
However, measures can be taken to resolve these issues. From the governments ’perspective, funds and investments could be poured to support the improvement and maintenance work of these tourist attractions, thus lowering the total ticket price. Installation of air conditioning and ventilation system can create a refreshing environment for the visitors. On top of that ,activities and campaigns related with festivals and social events could be held in those museums and historical sites to attract more attention. In the year 2017, a campaign held by group of feminism at Eiffel tower had drown thousands of local citizens flock to that place,and the peaceful protest soon caught much attention within the whole county, bringing more tourists to Eiffel tower .
In conclusion, high ticket price ，poor conditions， as well as the content of these spots are the main reasons that drive local people away from their historical sites, whereas improvements and efforts of the whole society can surely fix that problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19710144928 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79216630163 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585507246377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.067929714 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.416666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369566415108 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122756874969 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823255374053 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22299872412 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097192179637 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.